Sleepless: Revision Group 10

The Sketch for the End

Intro —

As mentioned previously, in the effort to be very transparent about the writing process, I’ve opted to include you all in the revision process as I go back through Sleepless and try to alter the first draft into something that I feel better conveys the narrative I wanted to explore.

These revision reviews WILL contain spoilers for the whole of Sleepless, as I’ll often take the opportunity to walk through why a choice or change was made and how I think it will serve the story better. You have been warned.

Without further ado, let’s get into my thoughts and changes for Sleepless’s first revision pass on these next few chapters.

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At long last, we’ve reached the final revision group for Sleepless.

Here, I’ll be describing primarily what my current ideas are for the revised ending, though unfortunately I will not be previewing any of them this week.

This ending I imagine will be quite the doozy to figure out, so I’ve tried to stick to the ideas/scenes that I am surer of.

Here’s the plan: